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PostSubject: Tayasu (Finished)   Tayasu (Finished) Icon_minitimeFri Nov 21, 2008 11:32 pm

Race: Human Transformation

Name: Tayasu

Age: 17

Sex: Male

Faction: N/A

Goal: His goal is to have a goal(Laughing). Basically he's not sure what he wants out of life exactly, so all he's doing is trying to find out what purpose he holds in life.

Physical Description: Tayasu (Finished) Hiei-2
Tayasu is tall, standing at around six feet, and is fairly muscular, although hard to tell at times. He has black, spiky hair that jets back, with a white outline in the front of it. Tayasu has Crimson eyes, that always seem the void of anything, and has a tan skin tone. He wears a black coat over himself most of the times, but it's usually open, revealing what he wears under that. The underside of the coat is blood red. Under the coat, he wears a black, sleeveless shirt, black pants and black boots. He is always also seen wearing white bandages around his right arm. His sword is also always nearby, if not on his person.

Personality: Tayasu has a cold tone when saying most things, and people usually doubt him to be a nice person at all. In and out of battle, he will not speak much unless in a conversation that interests him otherwise he keeps to himself. Tayasu can seem very strange if you spend time around him, as he will usually question his own motives, often trying to find a better solution to everything. Unlike some people, Tayasu has manners, or at least knows what they are, but rather chooses not to use them. This in turn, leads to him speaking his mind casually and saying many inappropriate and other things consider not socially acceptable. Tayasu normally keeps calm, and stays confident, although he is not void of his other emotions. He will also show perverted tendencies in his crude manner. Tayasu is also an extremely intelligent person, able to think many steps ahead of everyone, although he is arrogant at times. He is capable of risking his life for the benefit of his pride, however no one's ever been able to kill him, as he's won battles were his opponent were stronger than himself, mostly on account of him choosing his battles wisely.

Experience: Tayasu is only seventeen, although has already had great training with a sword, and is extremely skilled with them. When it comes to his emotional transformation abilities, he has just recently learned about them, although he has learned that the power is based on his emotions, and he's already transformed into three different creatures. Tayasu is also extremely fast and agile, and is skilled in hand-to-hand(weapon) combat, excelling in a street-fighting sort of manner. He is considered one of the most dangerous humans. The funny thing about his skill however, is that Tayasu is more powerful when not transformed into something, as he can control his power, and when transformed, he has yet the ability to control it.

Birthplace: Iki

Biography: Tayasu was born on Iki in a small village. His parents were part of a Ninja Clan, so it was decided what he would become when he was older, or so they thought. Tayasu was born with a curse, and that curse transformed him into different creatures depending on what kind of emotion he was feeling, which would usually be one of the 'bad' types of emotion. This was bad, because since birth, Tayasu had trouble controlling his emotions, becoming angry at a lot of things, arrogant with other things, and hating some things. When Tayasu was five, his parents had angered him, and in his rage, he transformed into a monstrous creature, and killed them both. From that point on, he had to defend for himself, living off the streets of his village, and still training in the ninja skills. He was able to get his father's sword before they burned down their home, and began to train with extensively.

Three years after Tayasu had murdered his parents, he still lived off the streets. No one had ever been able to trace the murder to Tayasu, as there had been no evidence that in any way led back to Tayasu, as he, himself, didn't know he was responsible for their deaths. The only thing which stood out between Tayasu and a normal human, was the simple mark, birth mark if you will, of a black dragon running along his arm, which he keeps covered in white bandages as much as possible. By now, his skills with a sword became unmatched in his village and any of the near towns, and he picked up some street fighting skills. Another year passed, and not only was he considered one of the deadliest men on Iki, a great accomplishment for being only nine years old, but he was out of the streets now, living in a home being payed for by himself. He was able to do this because his current job was he was a member a big assassination business, which payed big. In the business, he was nicknamed Tayasu no Kage, meaning Tayasu of the Shadows.

Now at the age of fifteen, Tayasu was known in the entire region, for his unmatchable speed and his great skilled with a sword. Being this powerful, however, went to his head, and he began to become all the more arrogant. This being one of his negative emotions, he transformed into a new creature, and killed off his entire village. Unlike the first time, however, Tayasu remembered everything he did, and now knew what must have happened to his parents as well. Figuring out this was connected to his emotions, Tayasu went into seclusion, detaching himself from everyone, and began to train himself to control his emotions better. After two years of this special training, he came out of his hiding, and made himself known to the world again. The problem, however, is the assassination business wasn't too pleased with his two year absence, and now has Tayasu on a tight leash, and sends him on many missions now, seeing if they can still trust him.

Role-Play Sample: Tonight the rain that was hitting the roof seemed to sound like bullets never ceasing to fire. Tayasu was wearing his black cloak, which hid his attire underneath as well as the blade that was always on his person. Tayasu was sitting in a small bar on the side of the main road. There was no town near them, however the road he was currently on lead to a great town, although it was a days trip from where he currently was. "Water" Tayasu said bluntly to the man who just appeared to take his order. There were two other people in the bar at the moment, and one more person had just entered the small place just as his water had arrived. Tayasu's crimson eyes watched as the man entered, although he did it discreetly.

The man who just entered sat down next to Tayasu, and ordered some sake. When the man behind the counter arrived with the mans drink, Tayasu spoke up. "Fine weather were having" he said without looking up to the man, not using much emotion in the statement. The man, after realizing that Tayasu was talking to him, turned and glanced at the rain pouring down outside, and turned back to Tayasu. "Umm, sure is..." the man replied, his tone seemed unsure. "Indeed" was Tayasu's only response, as it went quiet for about ten minutes. "Ah, I see now......." the man finally spoke up. Tayasu looked up, 85% sure he knew what was coming next. "I thought you looked familiar, but I wasn't expecting them to send Tayasu no Kage. Guess that means..." the man said as he began to pull out a pistol, but was cut off by Tayasu. The next thing that was heard was the quiet clink of his blade being placed back into its sheath. Blood soon sprayed from the mans neck, and his head flew up into the air, in which Tayasu pulled out a small bag, and caught it in.

Tying the bag and sliding it into his cloak, Tayasu pulled out a small card from one of his cloak pockets. "Inglebert Dodong (LMAO, Vir will get that name). Wanted for murder on ten different occasions and suspicions of being in league with a Oni bandit group. Current location: Unknown. Current position: Deceased" Tayasu read from the card as he filled out that last part. He then looked up, only to sigh at the sight of the head-less body lying on the floor. "I have a bad habit of that. I need to read these before they're completely dead" he said, shaking his head not really talking to anyone. He then pulled out some money, and placed it on the counter. "This should cover my drink and my 'apology' for this mess" Tayasu said as he walked out of the small bar, heading for the city to drop off the target, or at least his head.


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PostSubject: Re: Tayasu (Finished)   Tayasu (Finished) Icon_minitimeMon Nov 24, 2008 11:08 pm

The deed is done, XP.
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PostSubject: Re: Tayasu (Finished)   Tayasu (Finished) Icon_minitimeTue Nov 25, 2008 10:56 am

It was real good, but the only problem is the "dragon" ordeal. I dont mind the mysterious birthmark, but the fact that he is able to transform into a monstrous dragon makes him to much like a dragon, when he is actually human, I would just change monstrous dragon, to a different creature. Human Transformation, turns the cursed being into a monstrous form, not particualrly a certain form, like a dragon... Or other REAL creatures. Also, just a little notice is that you should be aware that the transformation, when getting angry, or depressed, or vengeful... never changes, so come up with uinique forms forms for each emotion, if you'd like. All I'd really change is the "monstrous dragon" ordeal. Since a dragon is its own race, and humans cannot shapeshift. Also, the "fire arm" did you mean a gun, or like, fire arms? If its a gun, you can't have it, since they weren't introduced to the eight islands yet. And if its literally fire arms, a human doesnt possess them, but one of your transformations can, the only way a human can get those powers are if, a Deity grants it to them, or if they become legendary or something, and they magically receive powers...

So just edit a little, then I'll be able to review, and approve most likely.
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PostSubject: Re: Tayasu (Finished)   Tayasu (Finished) Icon_minitimeTue Nov 25, 2008 11:07 am

Alrigh, although I'm still a bit confused on how Human Transformation's actually work, as I thought they transform into actual beings, but I think I understand it now. And yeah I meant fire arms as in guns, however I didn't mean he owns one, he just knows how to use one, although I don't need that, so I've edited both things.
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PostSubject: Re: Tayasu (Finished)   Tayasu (Finished) Icon_minitimeTue Nov 25, 2008 4:29 pm

Alright, looks good.

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PostSubject: Re: Tayasu (Finished)   Tayasu (Finished) Icon_minitimeTue Nov 25, 2008 5:42 pm

This app sucks >.> Completely re-do it. xD JK xD
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